Hug in spring_800字

Spring is here again.It is the best time of the year.It's also my favourite season,so I want to praise the Spring.    The plants start to grow.You can smell the flowers and see many bees and butterflies over them,as a result, you can take photos of them to stay as a souvenir on a sunny day.The grass turn green and they are full of vigour.What a nice Spring!    The animals wake up in spring.The snakes crawl out of the cave,lambs frisk and play  and birds sing beautiful songs.People walk their dogs and cats.How delightful the Spring is!      Most of the people also go outside to feel the natural beauty of the Spring.children like going to the open space to fly kites, farmers begin to sow and lovers walk hand in hand.Spring is so delightful!      All in all,Spring is not only wonderful  but also fantastic.Let's hug in Spring!

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Spring is coming. It is the best time of the year. It's also my favourite season. In spring, the plants start to grow. You can smell the flowers and see many bees and butterflies flying over them. So, you can take photos of them to keep as a memory of a sunny day. The grass begins to turn green and be full of vigor. What a nice Spring!   The animals begin to wake up in spring. The snakes crawl out of the caves, lambs goes out to play  and birds starts to sing beautiful songs. People walk their dogs and cats. How delightful the spring is! Most people also go outside to feel the beautiful srping. Children like going outside to fly kites. Farmers begin to sow. All in all, spring is not only wonderful  but also fantastic. Let's hug the spring! 

 修改老师：Crystal 老师

    初二:任思盈