Hug in spring_400字

　　 Spring will coming soon,and I am so happy to see it again.  I love spring because of its beautiful scenery,I can take my ease to play.I can fly the kite with my parents and friends.In addition ,I like doing some sports，so I can go hiking with my friends and see the nature beauty.I can also have a picnic with them.  When the spring comes,I will open my arms to meet the spring arrival.I miss you very much,so could you give me a hug?

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Spring is coming soon, and I am happy to see it again.

  I love spring because of its beautiful scenery. I can play outside. I can fly the kite with my parents and friends. In addition, in spring I can go hiking with my friends and see the beautiful nature. I     can also have a picnic with them.

  When the spring comes, I will open my arms to welcome its arrival. I miss you

very much, so could you give me a hug?

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