中考英语作文范文及评析:记叙文2

　　中考英语作文范文及评析:记叙文2
　　【习作要求】
　　请根据下面所给李玲的个人小档案，以Mygoodfriend为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍李玲的基本情况。要求条理清楚，语句通顺，体现表中的全部内容，不得少于12句话。

中文名：李玲  英文名：Susan
性别：女  年龄：15
祖籍：青海  学校：第八中学
年级：三  班级：二
特长：数学、英语  爱好：唱歌、看电视、打排球
优点：友好，善良，乐于助人，学习努力  　

　　【中考英语作文范文】
My Good Friend
　　I have a good friend. Her Chinese name is Li Ling, and Susan is her English name. She is from Qinghai. Li Ling is fifteen years old. She studies in No. 8 Middle School. She is in Class Two, Grade Three. Li Ling is good at maths and English. She likes singing and playing volleyball very much. And she sings quite well. She likes watching TV, too. Li Ling is very kind and friendly. She studies very hard and always likes helping others. What a good girl she is! I like her!

　　【名师点评】
　　这是一篇记叙文，内容要交待清楚、全面，要注意中英文的表达习惯，如汉语中年级在前，班级在后，而英语正相反；首尾句要格外留意，要保持短文的完整性。

　　(1) 格式：人物介绍
　　(2) 人称：第三人称
　　(3) 时态：一般现在时　　
　　(4) 短语：have a good friend, English name, to be from, No. 8 Middle School, in Class Two, Grade Three, to be good at, like singing and playing, sing well, like watching TV, study hard, what a good girl
　　(5) 句型：陈述句与感叹句