发布时间：2020-03-16 作者： 奈特英语
Here comes spring.
The world comes to itself.
I took my luggage and had an extemporaneous travel last Sunday.
Firstly, I went camping in a mountain near my hometown. Air in that mountain is fresher than that in city which smells a little disgusting.Here I had a big lunch which contained various foods such as fish, chicken, mutton and so on.When we were having lunch, birds kept company with us.They sang attractive songs which made us unbuttoned.
In modern city life, we are always worried about our personal affairs, and hardly have time to relax ourselves. So, I made best of this enjoyable time to enjoy my life.
Secondly, I went to fishing on a boat with my father in a river where trees stand. Flowers were singing, birds were singing, even fish were singing. Spring is a magic season. It can give people hope and energy to struggle for our goals.
As a will-graduated student, I learned a lot from this trip.
As I said, spring is a season which is full of power and magic. Everything is changing. Nothing is impossible. Spring starts lives and put hope in our mind. Hard and boring though College entrance examination is, I will encourage myself to struggle to the end, just as cockroaches.
Fighting!
修改后：
The spring is coming; and the weather becomes warmer and warmer. Last Sunday, I went outing with my parents.
First, we went camping in a mountain near my hometown. Air in that mountain is much fresher than that in the city. There we had a big lunch which contained various foods such as fish, chicken, mutton and so on. When we were having lunch, birds kept flying around us. They sang songs which made us happier. At that moment, my father said, “In modern city life, we are always worried about our personal affairs, and hardly have time to relax ourselves. So, let’s make best use of this enjoyable time to enjoy ourselves.” Then, I went fishing on a boat with my father in a river where trees stand. Birds were singing, even fish are singing.
Spring is really a magic season. It can give people hope and energy to struggle for their goals. Spring starts lives and puts hope in our mind. Hard and boring though college entrance examination is, I will encourage myself to struggle to the end.
高三:吴子鸣