发布时间：2020-03-14 作者： 奈特英语
I was vevy very busy and very very tired every weekend.I can't rest well in the day.I wanted play comp-uter at home!But I can't······ Why?This is a easy question. In the morning,I must get up early.So I was tired.My friends all are bored every weekend,but I'm not.Imust do many things,I had two art classes in Heishan.My mom went there drive car with me.It is not f-ar. At noon,I only ate a little food,because I didn't have many times.I had a piano lesson at twelve o'clock. In the afternoon,I'm very tired now,but I still went to my English School,I had two English classes,too. In the evening,I must do my homework.I can't play computer games,I'm sad. What a busy weekend!
修改后：
I am always very busy and tired every weekend. I can't have a good rest. I want to play computer at home! But I can't. I have got lots of things to do. In the morning, I must get up early. I have two art classes in Heishan. My mom drives me there. It is not far. At noon, I only eat a little food, because I don't have much time. I have a piano lesson at twelve o'clock. In the afternoon, I still have two English classes. In the evening, I must do my homework. I am so tired and sad. What a busy weekend I have!
修改老师：Crystal老师
六年级:赵子文