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【英语征文】Hug in spring_300字

发布时间:2020-03-14 作者: 奈特英语

  Spring is coming! Beautiful spring has come at last!     We walk on the grass, embrace the beautiful spring. Look! The flowers smile, the grass nodded, the little swallow flew back, the warm spring breeze blowing over the cheek, the birds are happy to sing, we are so happy!    oh! Spring is so full of life!

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Spring is coming! We walk on the grass to welcome and embrace the beautiful spring. Look! The flowers are smiling, the grass is nodding, the little swallows are twittering, the warm spring breeze is blowing over the cheek,  and the birds are singing happily. We are so happy! Spring is full of life! 

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